Virtue is rarely rewarded in a timely manner. To take a stand means standing no matter what and somewhere in the battle expect to get shot at are all subplots in your story. The plot is better yet.

Alas the protagonist, the warrior poet taking on the dragons is what I am talking about. The antagonist is your past and present ghost. Not the narcissist. That is too obvious.

Think about it Myla Morningstar. And one day.... someday when the time is right and the ghost is fully reckoned with. the battle will have been won. The one within.

Until then, stay tuned with your writing and the meaning of what it truly says when so many others are watching over your shoulders... ever aware of the dragons lurking on the edges of what genuine journeys are meant for. Ah, and there is the prize if you were to ask me.

Eric