Your treatise has merit. Thank you for that. It also arrives via the back door, lumbering under the burden of bias...focused on afterwards when the Stoic represents the before...in preparation, and with mindfulness, seeking to establish a view to see the other and themselves. Then what? You introduce reality beyond and ask why can not the Stoic solve the consequence to being what? Human or maybe a human without a sense of mindfulness who now, on the errand called unconsciousness, wanders into the place called reality beyond the self. Bradley, there is nothing wrong with being a feeling person or feeling what one does with the externals but take a pause and consider the place the Stoic stands and speaks and acts. You are outside that place. standing in the dust storm believing the dust once enveloped by it, can be not be managed by the wonder's of the Stoic for the Stoic focused on thinking about what you are thinking and not thinking how I am feeling after failing to do so before you entered the dust storm.
Thanks for listening. And keep on writing. Its good for your soulfulness.